Well, alive for now.
Today is kinda the first time in a long time I’ve been home earlier than 9 and thus I have enough time to actually write, but I’ve been procrastinating by playing games, watching Chinese serials on TV and trying to edit my novel that I don’t think I’ve gotten much done.
I have, however, reached a part in the novel I’m editing to look at it and say, “This does not feel right. Nothing in it does.”
I know what the scene is supposed to do. I know what it leads to. However, it feels very unnatural at this point in time. Oh, don’t get me wrong. I understand how the setting works. I understand why they meet in that particular kind of setting. However, it doesn’t paint the world richly enough.
Hmm… instead of clarifying the details, I should add more dialogue. There’s not enough observation in that scene. Or rather, I forgot how to look out of that character’s eyes. If I’m going to write that scene through her eyes, the first line needs to change.
I think it’s time to make the reader aware of that character from that character’s point of view, not from a third person limited point of view. Nope, not going into first person (I hate that kind of writing, it’s really difficult to get right for me), but I think I’ll need to modify her consciousness a bit.
BBL, playing with brain.
Considering that I now know where my books are going to go (and with the muses being a bit more cooperative) these are the titles for my works (list for my reference):
Book 1: Dreamer’s Kiss
Book 2: Keys to Twilight (no nothing to do with the novel)
Book 3: Key’s Kiss
Book 1 is completed, now being edited. Adding more things to Book 2. Book 3 I’ll probably leave off for next year.
MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAH I WON! Ok now to the actual business of finishing that monster. 😀
Now awaiting verification to open so I can actually verify. And finish this novel. 😀
Thanks to LadySeishou for finding the actual quote and otter_nanowrimo on Dreamwidth for mentioning it:
Yeah, well, the inspiration of a new story is exciting. But if you wind up not finishing ninety percent of what you start, guess what happens. After a few years you’ll have written 100 beginnings, 40 middles, and only 10 endings. Which means you’ll be great at writing beginnings, only so-so at middles, and you’ll suck at endings. Which means you will almost certainly keep faltering between the middle and the end of every story, which means you’ll keep giving up and not finishing . . . Rinse, repeat.
And that’s a hole you don’t want to fall into. So finish, even if you know this story isn’t going to win you the Nobel Prize—it’s good practice to type THE END.
It’s a great writing tip from Scott Westerfield.